Crime rate in most countries is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. Why do you think that it is? What can be done to reduce the crime rate?
Metro cities are more prone to crime than any of the rural place in any country. Many believe that the reason behind this is unemployment and rise in cost. Below paragraphs will state the reasons and solutions to it.
In this modern age, industrialization and globalization has impacted urban city more than any rural area to a extent that, people living in urban places require more manufactured items for maintaining their lifestyle. The primary reason for the increase in crime rates is, the rise in cost of basic needs. Secodary reason, inflow of people coming in hope to urban areas for job opportunities and better lifestyle. Finally, the increase in population of urban towns which leads to high compitetion for job positions. All the above reason, forces a person to do anything to meet their basic needs. For instance, instead of high vigilant police, a person would be readily be willing do trafficing of illegal product to earn to maintain his lifestyle.
On the other hand, villages has low crime rates which is perhaps, due to low standard of lifestyle, limited needs to maintain it. Most of them know each other as the population is very low.
However, to fight back the crime one need to be vigilant about his surrounding, notice and report any abnormal activities to the cops. Take safety measures such as, locking the doors, shut windows, do not leave their belonging unattended. Furthermore, they can learn self defence methods, to be prepared to face any unforeseen circumstances.
To conclude, their will be unfortunate happening for which one need to be more alert and ready to fight back.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, so, as for, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0036900369 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73805213757 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590405904059 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2057818865 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205036578655 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612525628438 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410575196453 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958648963144 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401171539419 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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