Culture and traditions change from generation to generation. Why does this happen? What can be done to change it?
It is undoubtedly true that culture and tradition that are both the backbone of a country which has changed from generation to generation. There are numerous reasons that are associated with this debate .This essay will explain mentioned reasons and will recommend few possible remedies to overcome this issue.
Perhaps, the principle argument is the technology that has formed on integral part of everyone's life. From a technological perspective, people who live in this situation are more likely to benefit from new ways of communication, to extent that they would aware of others cultures and customs. Iranians new generation, for instance, since they spend most of their time to surfing the net and social media, they are willing to follow west cultures and celebrate the Valentin's day or Halloween ceremony rather than their traditional days. Therefore, their ancestors’ culture will be forgotten and this situation is compounded by the fact that this problem be overlooked by parents and government.
Another point to make is that immigration to abroad. Nowadays, the people who move to another country for studying or living are increased. Since they are compelled to adapt themselves to the rules and customs of the country they are living. Notwithstanding children who live in foreign country should learned the mother's tongue from an early age, but this matter not observed by same parents and they are trying to utilize the language of the foreign country.
Nevertheless, there are potential ways to control these changes, or at least reduce the effects. Firstly, families should maintain traditional behavior such as family gathering, seeing historical films with their children, implementing original traditional customs. Secondly, governments should provide a unique learning experience to reflect the lifestyle of their historical personality.
In conclusion, the importance reasons that causes the changing in culture and tradition in newest generation are technology and moving to abroad. This trend could be stopped if families and governments apply rectifying measures.
- Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences 78
- Some people suggest that bringing up children by the whole family including uncles aunts and grandparents is better rather than only by parents Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your opinion and examples 73
- Some people think that the government should give money to creative people, such as artists and musicians. To what extent do you agree? 84
- In Many Countries Small Shops And Town Centers Are Going Out Of Business Because People Tend To Drive To The Large Out Of Town Stores This Results In An Increase In Car Use And It Also Means That People Without Cars Have Limited Access To Out Of Town Stor 84
- Advertising is influencing people more and more Is this a positive or a negative trend Give your opinion and examples 51
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, as for, at least, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59501557632 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92066001908 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582554517134 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9585304728 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.733333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241559483774 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763406469322 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927610566159 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1408555762 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926604927239 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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