The cultures of many countries around the world becomes more similar than they used to be.
What are the reasons for this trend?
Is it positive or negative?
The expansion in business and tourism industry at global scale has made the world a global village where many nations are more identical in cultures compared to the past. In my opinion, I believe it is certainly a very positive shift but only to a certain extent as it has detrimental impact on cultural values and particularity which have made them unique in the first place.
The trend of cultural transfer becomes more aggressive after the industrialization when people started to migrate to different places all over the world. The rise of globalization, which has enabled people to interact with people from different cultural background for business purposes, acted as a prime catalyst to fuel the inter-culture interaction. Consequently, people started to explore various community all over the world, which has encouraged to adopt different traditions from these societies. Thus, without any realization, various nations became similar in cultures.
The cultural migration has not only strengthened the unity throughout the globe but also uplifted the ease of business. When people have same mentality, the chances of discrimination, which is major issue in many countries, reduce to a great extent. At the same time, multinational companies, which has business spread all over the globe, will be benefitted because of similar culture throughout the world. Thus, similarity in culture is beneficial well-being of society as well as economy.
However, it is a direct threat to individuality and originality of any community when resemblance is encouraged more over uniqueness. It also has detrimental impact on tourism industry, which is only source of income for many nations, such as Nepal, because cultural diversity is a major attraction for many people. Thus, identical culture is nothing but a double-edged sword.
In conclusion, although cultural similarity motivates the world-wide unity, it is dangerous for individuality. Thus, people should be encouraged for multi-culture co-existence to make the world better place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, then, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in the first place, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54313099042 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14821823534 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533546325879 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9633435488 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243050840867 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857968588209 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493070323924 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143842423524 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310426284137 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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