Demand for food is increasing worldwide.
What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to meet this demand?
Countries all over the world are struggling to increase the supply of food in this era. The prime reason of such scarcity of food has appeared as the world population has tremendously increased. Putting light on that fact that why such increase in population is the prime reason, this essay will also discuss the expected role to be played by authorities developed by nations.
The booming population of a nation naturally pushes the demand for food. firstly, the country now has to feed more countrymen than that of past decades. As more mouths require more food, the demand keeps rising. Secondly, increasing citizens require more space to live, so the lands, previously used for cultivate crops as well as vegetables, are now used to make houses. Such actions not only reduces the agricultural production capacity of a country, but also limits the ability to fight back the food-crisis.
Though, the increasing population reduces the country’s capability to produce more food, global bodies can play a vital role in meeting up food demand of nations. The authorities have to focus on integrated irrigation system with the combination of advanced cultivating techniques, use of technological instruments as well as genetically modified crops because the countries have to produce more food in limited space. Moreover, the authorities have to focus on developing global logistics system to withdraw the barriers of domestic borders among the nations to ensure that the food is produced in the most convenient place and distributed as per the demand.
To conclude, as the population of the globe increases, global demand for food will continue to increase. But the meeting-up the demand solely depends on global authorities to ensure more production in available lands by integrated irrigation and developing border-less logistics system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37671232877 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93413617523 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530821917808 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7663095695 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.769230769 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212629130168 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870661225451 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601312627453 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132542186198 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00730762944624 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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