It is important to give children the chance to act independently and make their own decisions from early age. Do you agree or disagree?
People demonstrate the best learning capability during the early stage of life. Engaging younglings in decision making as well as act on their own has unique significances. I agree that such actions help the kids to develop leadership skills and managing capacity.
Children, enjoying the freedom to decide on their own play-house have the opportunity to manage their own life as well with minimum supervision. Parents can ensure flexibility to a child's activities, not harmful for him, can help him develop the sense of write and wrong. Moreover, as he runs his own operation, the managerial skill, demonstrated in early-life, keeps getting updated as he ages. Such Children are expected to become less dependent on others. In USA, for example, a social research article claimed that children, raising in day-care, are more successful in managing their life events than the kids raised with parental authority. Children, practicing free-will, receives first-mover advantages over others in future life.
Furthermore, a small child evolves to become a good leader in future, if he is given the opportunity to make decisions. In other words, as decision-making requires practice from the very beginning, making good decision requires continuous practice with the capacity to visualise the outcome. A boy, who makes small decisions from the early stage, is better of others in terms of decision making, resulting in a better leader among others. An individual with the practice of leadership from early life will perform better than the rest of the people who could hardly practice decision making.
To conclude, children can learn faster than adults. In case, they are provided with the choice to run operation and make decisions, it is possible to develop their capacity which will not only help them become self-dependent, but also promote the evolution of a better leader.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 60, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...l child evolves to become a good leader in future, if he is given the opportunity to make...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35234899329 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85342261674 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580536912752 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2964361479 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232503125872 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789157141321 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616445349219 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138902887505 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464169363321 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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