Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the world,
particularly in their contribution to global warming. What can be done to reduce
the dangers of global warming?
It is true, that for the last century the issue of climate changes has become really dangerous, moreover, it has influenced all the people and nature around the world. I suppose, it is not a secret that main producers if this issue there is advanced countries. So, let us to discuss the problem and try to offer some things to reduse the trouble.
In my opinion, one of the common reasones for this problem gettin worse is that there is no acceotance of the global warming as a really huge and destroying issue reach and modern countries such us China and the USA. These countries produse common part of air pollution because of their heavy industry and agriculture. For example, just Chinese heavy production pollute in air near 60% of carbon dioxide emission, in addition beef production in the USA it cause up to 80% pollution of methan.
However, there are some ways of solving and decreasing the issue. Firstly, it is really necessary to reduce the amount of carbon dioxide emission, to improve and rebuild some of the old and not modern factories. in places where it is possible it is needed to build carbon capture and storage plants. Second stage is to try to stop deforestation around the world, in addition to plant young forests and maintain the oldones. Third stage, I guess, it is necessary to do same changes in agricultural sector such as to reduce the amount of beef production.
In concludion, the problem of climate changes on the planet Earth has reached too far, but I really beleive if all the people start to use some of this things for solving the issue, the planet will be in safety for next generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, third, as to, for example, i guess, i suppose, in addition, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71080139373 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.523903859 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533101045296 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0252524628 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1666666667 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0818965804197 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0260389196227 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347810239714 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0452328919095 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296989445391 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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