Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the world,particularly in their contribution to global warming. What can be done to reducethe dangers of global warming?

Industrialized nations have caused many environmental issues. Among these problems, global warming is the most concerning one. In this essay, I will clarify why global warming is serious to our Earth and propose ways to minimize its effects.

It is obvious that the numerous coal power plants in developed countries account for the most greenhouse gas emissions in the world. Although greenhouse gas emissions also come from nature such as volcanic eruptions, human activity still takes the heaviest responsibilities for exhausting harmful gases to the environment which leads to global warming.

Scientists have pointed out the devastating impacts of global warming on Earth. Some would be hard for us to imagine but they are happening now at a rapid rate. To illustrate, global warming leads to the rise in atmospheric temperature which causes Arctic permafrost melting, sea level rising, etc. This results in the loss of vast habitats of many species and pushes a large number of animals on the verge of extinction. On the other hand, the frequency of extreme weather events lately such as floods, rainstorms, drought, etc gives clear evidence of serious consequences caused by global warming.
Nevertheless, there are still solutions to reduce the extensive damage. Governments need to limit the use of fossil fuels and force people to use environmentally-friendly resources like wind, water, and solar power. Strict fines should also be placed for those who don't follow the rules. Besides, increasingly raising awareness about the happening issues is a useful way to spread the importance as well as the urge for actions.

To summary, hundreds of years of releasing greenhouse gases have posed a severe problem of global warming for our Earth. Thus, humans should take strong actions to decrease the harmful effects caused by global warming. Imposing strict laws, spreading awareness among citizens are some of the ways to limit the emissions of exhaust fumes.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ast habitats of many species and pushes a large number of animals on the verge of extinction. On ...
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Line 6, column 266, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nes should also be placed for those who dont follow the rules. Besides, increasingly...
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Line 8, column 281, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... spreading awareness among citizens are some of the ways to limit the emissions of exhaust ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, nevertheless, so, still, thus, well, such as, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34615384615 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91329757514 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628205128205 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4119318178 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1176470588 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237615122419 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071743919584 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533682593398 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128143621685 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057929536201 0.056905535591 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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