Developing countries require international organization’s help. Some people prefer financial aid while others think practical aid and advice are better.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
There is little doubt that underdeveloped nations seek help from the world’s organizations; however, the argument over whether they should assist in monetary terms, or send help using other means has not been settled yet. This essay will argue that although financial aid is imperative for the development of a country, I believe that technical guidelines and supervision are important.
To embark with, in many progressing nations the sole hurdle in initiating a new project is lack of funds. This is to say that despite having the best medical practitioners in the health sector, to eradicate viral diseases like polio, hepatitis, a lot of investment is required to make vaccines against them. Without any external financial support, it is not possible to complete an unfinished or start a new program. However, in these countries, corrupt politicians utilize this money for their personal agenda.
On the other hand, the developing nations should receive practical help rather than financial because the development programs are more prone to extortion and influence-peddling by the unfair officials. For instance, in 2019, the United Nations have initiated a campaign to overcome hunger in India, in which they are sending their teams to the areas, which are deprived of food with all basic necessities. Moreover, these teams get directions from their higher authorities, and they send a report on a weekly basis about the areas being covered so that the world ranking of India in hunger could be upgraded.
To conclude, people may vary in their opinions, I believe that financial help is prone to corruption, hence practical help and dictations are important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to use' or 'use'.
Suggestion: to use; use
... assist in monetary terms, or send help using other means has not been settled yet. T...
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Line 9, column 389, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...as, which are deprived of food with all basic necessities. Moreover, these teams get directions f...
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Line 13, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ical help and dictations are important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, may, moreover, so, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36842105263 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93286336017 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635338345865 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.1021691464 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.8 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13756439847 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510334082351 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552390791518 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894319762112 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461192585645 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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