With the advent of technology and enhancements in the way of living, people are gradually distancing themselves from tradition and culture. Although modernisation is important, but there is an utmost need to preserve the authenticity in our lives. This essay will discuss the importance of traditional methods and how to include them in our day to day life.
To begin with, what our tradition and culture has taught us has been scientifically proven to be apt in modern world. Earthen pot, for instance, were used to preserve water in summers in every household to make water accurately cold and purified instead of plastic water bottles which are kept in refrigerator nowadays and have significantly adverse effect on our health. These kind of water storage pots have been verified by Scientists that they maintain the approriate temperature which is required by human body. Additionally, bicycles that were used by our ancestors, was the best way to commutate instead of motor vehicles now which degrades the air quality and does not contribute in the maintainance of our physical health which cycles do. Not only this but also the basic way of eating food have changed a lot over a period of time and people now prefer to eat on dining table with forks and spoons unlike old times when people used to sit on floor, with gratitude in heart, and use their hands for eating.
To bring back the ancient culture and routine, we must follow what the elder people, like grandparents, has to say. They are the perfect people who can help us to get in touch with our roots. For example,we should try to make desert at home during festivals, as this will bring family closer to each other and also it will save us from outside unhygienic food. Secondly, there should be cultural programmes in schools and societies which can educate children about the hazardous impacts of being modern and tell them the benefits of simplicity in life.
There is no harm in using new technologies and ways, infact it is necessary upto an extent, but one should never forget that traditions are vital for being original to yourself and society and it would not be incorrect to say that modenisation and cultural values should go hand in hand.
- Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change Others however think that change is always a good thing Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work Some people regard this as completely wrong while others consider it as valuable work experience important for learning and taking responsibilities Discuss 78
- Some people think it s better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them Other people believe it s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- The government should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country s development and progress To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished To what extent do you agree or disagree Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...ificantly adverse effect on our health. These kind of water storage pots have been verifie...
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Line 3, column 827, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...f eating food have changed a lot over a period of time and people now prefer to eat on dining ...
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Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86052631579 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63872057262 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594736842105 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9173295498 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.076923077 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2307692308 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278916018262 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924677708256 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785283720633 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163888768275 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752028423536 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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