Digital Digital communication technology, such as email, instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and connection between people.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answers and include examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write atleast 250 words.
advanced communication tools, namely emails, messages, and social networks, have enhanced the ways people communicate and connect. Personally, I partially agree with this statement because I believe that these technologies facilitate the methods of communication among people because of their availability. however, I think that they negatively affect the connection between people because they may no longer meet each other as in the past.
Admittedly, cutting-edge communication technologies are available everywhere. In other words, people can gain access to these tools via smart-phones, laptops, and computers, which have widespread existence. When users of these devices get connected to the internet, they can easily get in touch with relatives and friends. For example, international students and expats usually utilize video chatting or instant messaging applications to keep in touch with families and friends. Thus, digital communication technologies have supported people’s communication due to their global availability
However, technological communication tools make people meet each other less frequent than before. this is because people wrongly consider it enough to contact each other by phone or messages instead of visiting each other. visits have special meanings and emotional support which may not be given by just a phone call especially for certain groups of people. For instance, grandparents need to be visited regularly by their family members; otherwise, they might feel neglected. Therefore, advanced communication technologies have unfavorable consequences on people’s connections due to the fact that they decrease the frequency of visits among them.
In conclusion, although I agree that advanced communication technologies have facilitated the methods people communicate due to availability, I would argue that they negatively affect connections among them owing to the current low number of visits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.05035971223 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24311248385 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593525179856 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1855956609 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.384615385 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176350469684 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687092079917 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416880687296 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119788886553 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267467994393 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.81 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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