In the present world of modernization, the modes of communication and connection between people have been changed drastically. Nowadays, digital communication system is spreading widely among all ages improving interaction between them. This essay will discuss why digitization is not in the favor of human despite its numerous benefits.
A plethora of people prefer to communicate through digital communicating techniques like emails, instant messages, social media, et cetera, because these act as a time saver. In the past, people tend to write letters to their beloved ones, which took a lot of time to deliver in order to convey some information. And after that, they had to wait for the responses, which further took a long time to reach time. However, These timesaving methods now allow folks to communicate over large distances in a short interval of time. Moreover, it gives facilities like video conferencing which allow a person to talk while looking at each other. For example, many children nowadays are studying abroad rather than in their own country and these options allow their parents and relatives to talk to them without any effort. Thus, these techniques are considered to be useful.
However, I think that these have negatively affected the connection between people because they now meet each other less frequent as in the past. The visits have their own importance and emotional support cannot be given on a phone call or a message. For instance, old people need to be visited by their family members: otherwise they will feel neglected. Therefore, advanced communication technologies have unfavorable consequences on people’s connections due to the fact that they decrease the frequency of visits among them.
In conclusion, this essay argued why the digital communicating system is unfavorable despite having some advantages. However, in my opinion, face-to-face conversations are more effective than that done through phone or any other social media.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38906752412 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94454418609 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607717041801 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1057213554 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.75 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183349102988 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607889587031 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575173927102 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124194647942 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533549426577 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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