Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online friendships and offline friendships
There is no doubt that friendships are the essential piece of human life. While some people think that online friendships offers more advantages, others argue that offline companions are better than this. In this essay, I will discuss both the sides of the arguments.
Firstly, In online space people can easily make lots of friends. This is because in nowadays the internet provides filter options to search for friends in your locality who can become most likely your good buddies. For instance, according to the recent study made by the UK Government 45% of the young students find fellows through channels such as facebook, snapchat and myspace etc. Furthermore, youngsters frequently open their social media accounts to either talk to their companions or share the status on their facebook wallpost which applies same for the adults as well. As a result, people are more engaged in chatting with their freinds online rather than spending time outside with the local boys of his locality.
However, with offline friendships one get an opportunity to meet with their companions regularly. To illustrate this, 80% of the people share their problems and opinions more with their friends and less with their families. The reason for this is that they get a chance to pass the message to someone whom they think is more trustworthy and can certainly help them to get out of the situation. In addition, they spend their weekend time especially with their past-time classmates in order to share some jokes, ideas and business plans with them. Therefore, it is apparent from the above situation that people who prefer offline friends love to spend their time in their friends company.
In conclusion, Although with online freindships one can make lots of friends but if you compare it with offline friendships I personally believe that meeting in person is more beneficial than talking to somone in a virtual environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10443037975 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54942137574 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579113924051 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7919064961 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.214285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143721458148 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630964458476 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072506916309 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128237006537 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951217442451 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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