Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of your way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying for the next generation.
There subsists a tremendous difference between the lifestyle of our parents and ours. However, some positives and negatives comes along with both the ways of life. This essay will showcase both the sides of the coin and outline the more convenient way of lifestyle adoption for the coming generation.
As an initial point, our generation is surrounded with technology to simplify work. We endeavor to make full use of resources such as laptops and mobile phones. For instance, we spontaneously look at the reviews on Internet of any place before visiting unlike our parents who asks other people or go randomly to any place. Additionally, our generation perform online shopping of goods which consequently helps to save time. It is seen hat all the grocery markets specially are nowadays filled with elderly people because they do not shop online.
After considering the above salient reasons, the drawbacks now merit some meaningful discussion. Being more technology equipped, our generation has lost a sense of physical interaction with people. For instance, our parents always believed in meeting face to face whereas we stand by social media for interaction. Another reason that warrants favoring our parent's lifestyle is the presence of more physical activities in their lives than ours. They always prefer to do exercise in the morning, on the other hand, our generation feels lethargic in waking up early.
By and large, the coming generation should should make a conscious choice and adopt the positives of both the lifestyles as no single lifestyle is perfect. Not sticking to technology much and keeping a check on health, indeed will demonstrate the best choice made by future generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: should
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, look, so, whereas, for instance, such as, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23722627737 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74775832668 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627737226277 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0483311472 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178025186735 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568860220566 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476343491171 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100312289126 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578409006279 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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