Discuss the importance of social media and freedom of speech. Why is social media important for freedom in society? Some people say that it is impossible to live without social media in this modern era of technology. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
No doubt that social media nowadays has conspicuously impact on people and their freedom of speech. However, some nations impose restrictions and limitations on social media to ensure no criticisms or objections that might made by their citizens. This essay will be further discussed the effect of social media for people and their freedom as well as the factors that make these platforms very essential in such innovative era.
Irrefutable that social media provides great opportunities to many users for expressing their thoughts, comments and suggestions toward their local organizations. Some of these comments in fact help different authorities to test people’ satisfaction and enhance their provided services. For Instance, several Saudi Arabia local services are usually publishing a brief weekly survey in different social media channels like Facebook, twitter, Instagram and others to check their users’ opinion on the given services. In result, these advices and comments tend to obvious improvement on the given facilities. On the contrary, some other countries such like Iran where only a unilateral exist v, they not accepting any kind of objection or even comments from their citizens and very tough fines and measurements might be applied on people who breakdown their rules. They otherwise create new platform which called YTG as same as Facebook but local made in order to control people’ opinions. This action makes most of Iranian people be to afraid to criticize or even express their suggestions.
Social media have plenty of advantages for both people and their surrounded community. Many individuals indeed considered it as an extremely essential in such modern era. Firstly, it's the number one global communication option for lots of people due to it efficincy. Facbook messenger and watsapp applications for example are the most popular communication applications in Saudi Arabia which allow people to contact their friends, families or anyone anywhere free with very high quality. Secondly, the best place to grasp international news or even job ads. To illustrate, many specialized social platforms such like LinkedIn are posting several job adveritsement, this valuable feature helps unemployment individual to find their dream positions easily. Finally, social media also has a huge leverage on people’ life style. Since it helps them to adjust some innocent habits such like smoking by posting various helpful data about the detrimental effect of their bodies.
In conclusion, social media in my opinion is becoming so intrinsic platform for people daily life not because it helps them to connect with other people, but it allows them participate effectively and proactively in the evolution of their community by expressing their valuable views and suggestions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 846, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a breakdown'.
Suggestion: who is a breakdown
...measurements might be applied on people who breakdown their rules. They otherwise create new ...
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Line 3, column 1047, Rule ID: TO_TOO[5]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... action makes most of Iranian people be to afraid to criticize or even express the...
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Line 3, column 1105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cize or even express their suggestions. Social media have plenty of advantages f...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... essential in such modern era. Firstly, its the number one global communication opt...
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Line 5, column 639, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun job seems to be countable; consider using: 'several jobs'.
Suggestion: several jobs
...latforms such like LinkedIn are posting several job adveritsement, this valuable feature he...
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Line 5, column 646, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s such like LinkedIn are posting several job adveritsement, this valuable feature...
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Line 5, column 833, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ge leverage on people' life style. Since it helps them to adjust some innocent h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2390.0 1615.20841683 148% => OK
No of words: 432.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53240740741 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88514343501 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56712962963 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 748.8 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5868036183 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.789473684 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7368421053 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94736842105 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261975875795 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968613637236 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862150300773 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194915861356 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941589458087 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 78.4519038076 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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