; You are due to start a new job next week, but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your employer including
- your situation
- Your problems
- When you think you can start
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that unfortunately I won't be able to start working in the agreed date due to some issues that happened to me earlier this week, as I supposed to begin my service on the may 21th, however, my parents have come from Syria to see me after very long time and they will get back their homes on may 22th.
In fact my parents are visiting Toronto for the first time and they know nothing here. Moreover, they didn't speak english at all. thus, they need an assist form me especially during the last couple of days. Therefore, I have to stay with them for merely 2 days, and then, I'll drop them at the airport and waiting until they ride the plane.
Thus, I would be extremely grateful if it possible for me to change my starting date which was on may 21th and make it on 23th may will really kind of you, and you can deduct those 2 days from my holiday allowance.
And finally I hope that my request does not cause you any inconvenience.
Best regards
Bilal.A.Ab
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you t...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... they know nothing here. Moreover, they didnt speak english at all. thus, they need a...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...eover, they didnt speak english at all. thus, they need an assist form me especially...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... with them for merely 2 days, and then, Ill drop them at the airport and waiting un...
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Line 12, column 7, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
... inconvenience. Best regards Bilal.A.Ab
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Line 12, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ab
...nconvenience. Best regards Bilal.A.Ab
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, thus, i suppose, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40314136126 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24585971476 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675392670157 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.449187406 44.8134815571 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 105.125 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 4.34317383033 305% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18876753458 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640660823673 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810895336846 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127702178687 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738175409268 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.