The younger generation is mainly responsible for the latest technological developments. How far do you agree?
technology is usually evolving according to different people demands. some individuals believe that younger generations have a conspicuous impact on such enhancements. In my point of view, I wholeheartedly disagree with that and this essay will explore the reasons of my opinion in further detail and before coming to a conclusion.
First of all, there is no doubt that most of the young adults or even children are living in an innovative era as well as they are the main users of it. As, they have a faster ability to familiarize themselves among various technologies such as tablets, very sophisticated PCs and advanced smart phones than other older generations. Using such tools also might help them to participate in enhancing the current technology. moreover, there are a plenty of channels can creators demonstrate their notions through it. In contrast, there is an obvious competition among applicants and most of the sponsors are merely looking for the quality of products regardless of the applicants ages.
Second of all, it’s irrefutable that there are a plethora of successful old innovators who were working very hard in extremely poor resources to establish a new trend or enhance the current facilities. those people might spend their lifespan in terms of proving their idea to the public. For instance, the founder of Apple company Stive Jobs was working at his own garage and he had a strong belief on his skills. As a result of impressive works, the company has eventually become the number one worldwide in the electrical field and contribute in developing the technology.
On the other hand, lots of young people across the world are still depending on their families as well as communities to live, some of them have a negative attitude or even pessimistic. those kind of young people are applying too much pressures on their societies.
To sum up, although younger people might be the most technology users, but that not means they are the merely creators and developers of these technical enhancements. In my opinion the resilience and passion are the key of any success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, still, well, for instance, in contrast, kind of, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09510086455 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87308466961 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590778097983 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4319116233 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0731264329846 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.022197728968 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296272290212 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0397383828802 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027610092264 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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