People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company that provides the connection. In your letter,
• Describe the problem.
• Explain how that is affecting people.
• Say what the company should do to help.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that there is a technical issues with the internet connection in our area. Yesterday in the morning most of the tenants and I faced some difficulties in joining the internet. We tried to turn the wify device off and on several times without any progression in the performance.
As a result of such error, most of the people and I were unable to do our daily tasks due to the poor service in the internet connections. Since most of us are students, this matter is extremely significant, thus, we forced to find other places such as internet cafe to finalize our assignments.
Therefore, we extremely are looking for your support to fix this problem as soon as possible by sending someone to check out this problem. In case this issue needs more than one day to be fixed you are kindly requested to supply us for a temporary internet line until solving our problem.
I would appreciate your immediate attention and action to this matter. I look forward to receiving your supportive response.
Best regards
Bilal
- Some people believe that homework should not be given to students. But other people believe that homework should be given to students. Explain both the views and also give your opinion. 78
- New technologies and ways of buying and selling products are transforming the lives of consumers.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 11
- For many people, the reason they hard work is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill should be made a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree? 89
- Some people think a crime should always have a fixed punishment like life for murder whereas others think you should take the circumstances of the crime into account What is your viewpoint 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...out any progression in the performance. As a result of such error, most of the ...
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...ernet cafe to finalize our assignments. Therefore, we extremely are looking for ...
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...nternet line until solving our problem. I would appreciate your immediate attent...
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... to receiving your supportive response. Best regards Bilal
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...r supportive response. Best regards Bilal
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...ive response. Best regards Bilal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, thus, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82258064516 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70079295319 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650537634409 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9838341705 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154361957008 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560074155568 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446560525259 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897989472226 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229136409238 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.