Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
International music that we hear these days should replace traditional musics of different countries.
A considerable number of people assert that traditional music must give way to modern music to flourish. Others, on the other hand, are adamant opponents of the aforementioned view, claiming that traditional music isn’t replaceable. As far as I am concerned, there is a plethora of cogent and compelling arguments to buttress the latter, thereby I am predisposed to gainsay the former.
One reason why I am fundamentally in disaccord with the brought forth issue has to do with the fact that unlike modern music, traditional musics such as classical music are vital parts of many European cultures. In my observation classical masterpieces written by composers as Mozart, Bach and Vivaldi have largely penetrated (into) different aspects of European lifestyles. For a supporting example one need investigate no further than a Saturday evening in Covent Garden packed with thousands of Londoners who, while elegantly dressed, are walking down the street after enjoying a night of classical music concert.Hence, it would be ridiculous to assume that this style will ultimately be replaced by modern music.
To add further credence to my assertion I note that certain traditional musics such as folklore carry religious and symbolic messages to some cultures. In my view, many Pagans and Druids listen to their folklore during their rituals to worship their gods and goddesses. A sort of example that aptly illustrates my assertion has to do with the Summer Solstice ritual in Stonehedge performed by Pagans and Wiccans alike. They play their flute and their many other traditional instruments while dancing naked to celebrate the arrival of the summer season and to thank the god of the sun for bringing them blessings galore.So, we can see that traditional music is the music that carries thousands of years of history and religion with itself.
In a nutshell, I am of adamant position that modern music cannot be treated as an alternative to traditional music and neither should be considered as such. I take this view on account in a fit of the fact that traditional music is not only deeply woven into every fabric of many European cultures and their lifestyles but it is also the preferred music of the old religions of European continent prior to the arrival of Christianity and Islam.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, while, as to, sort of, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12765957447 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90126785011 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550531914894 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.5487301995 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.666666667 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267098208586 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101210745212 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693289428526 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165980985426 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261074939698 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.