Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Sometimes people think nowadays the media (TV, newspaper, Internet) are less concerned about the accuracy of news than in the past, and the incorrect information may cause more problems to the public.
There are always good and bad consequences following technological developments. Nowadays, the accuracy of the news indeed much less than before. With the development and progress of the network platform, the public has many ways to contact a variety of news meanwhile the authenticity of these news has also lost its guarantee.
Firstly, the development of the Internet has extended the birth of self-media. In other words, it is operated by an independent individual rather than by a company or government institution. Accordingly, these self-media content will also have a lot of news that they have made up. For example, they will exaggerate or falsify facts in order to gain higher popularity and flow, because that seems unreasonable news can really attract people’s attention.
At the same time, due to the lack of supervision by relevant departments, these fake news are more readily spread on the Internet. For instance, the onion news we familiar is typical to please the public in the form of fake news.
Secondly, although these fake news can be favored by the public, they will also cause some problems, especially in the life circle of the elders. Taking my parents as an example, my parents always send some fake news to me and tell me to pay attention to these things.such as eating some fruits can lead to poisoning or discovering unknown creatures in outer space, etc. These ridiculous news really makes my parents fearful, but obviously, it is totally unnecessary. But in this situation is hard to explain to my parents, because they are used to believe the news from the public media.
Finally, the news in the past indeed more accurate than it is now. Because in the past, all the news are from the government media such as official TV program, newspaper or official Internet platform and so on. There would be a special commissioner to review these news from the official media, therefore the credibility of these news is extremely high. In addition, the official media would not permit the mistake or fake news happened. Contrast with nowadays, because fake news and pictures are abundant and sometimes difficult to distinguish, even the official media will make false reports occasionally. For example, pictures of aliens processed by photoshop have been published many times by some official media.
According to the above statements, the current news does have an amount of false content, some of which will affect the public and some just to entertain the public. It is precisely because of this that the public needs to read these news with critical thinking to prevent to lost in the massive information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...y of news meanwhile the authenticity of these news has also lost its guarantee. Firstl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hese news has also lost its guarantee. Firstly, the development of the Internet...
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...e the public in the form of fake news. Secondly, although these fake news can b...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to believing'.
Suggestion: used to believing
...explain to my parents, because they are used to believe the news from the public media. Fi...
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...lieve the news from the public media. Finally, the news in the past indeed mor...
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Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...uld be a special commissioner to review these news from the official media, therefore the ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...ial media, therefore the credibility of these news is extremely high. In addition, the off...
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...hed many times by some official media. According to the above statements, the c...
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Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...e of this that the public needs to read these news with critical thinking to prevent to lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2226.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 441.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04761904762 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84800034572 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510204081633 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 701.1 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7542752438 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09523809524 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211134316765 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737788980124 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388215767605 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116790718987 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335030776726 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.