Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Sometimes people think nowadays the media (TV, newspaper, Internet) are less concerned about the accuracy of news than in the past, and the incorrect information may cause more problems to the public.
There are always good and bad consequences following technological developments. Nowadays, the accuracy of the news indeed much less than before. With the development and progress of the network platform, the public has many ways to contact a variety of news meanwhile the authenticity of these news has also lost its guarantee.
Firstly, the development of the Internet has extended the birth of self-media. In other words, it is operated by an independent individual rather than by a company or government institution. Accordingly, these self-media content will also have a lot of news that they have made up. For example, they will exaggerate or falsify facts in order to gain higher popularity and flow, because that seems unreasonable news can really attract people’s attention.
At the same time, due to the lack of supervision by relevant departments, these fake news are more readily spread on the Internet. For instance, the onion news we familiar is typical to please the public in the form of fake news.
Secondly, although these fake news can be favored by the public, they will also cause some problems, especially in the life circle of the elders. Taking my parents as an example, my parents always send some fake news to me and tell me to pay attention to these things.such as eating some fruits can lead to poisoning or discovering unknown creatures in outer space, etc. This ridiculous news really makes my parents fearful, but obviously, it is totally unnecessary. But in this situation is hard to explain to my parents, because they are used to believe the news from the public media.
Finally, the news in the past indeed more accurate than it is now. Because in the past, all the news is from the government media such as official TV program, newspaper or official Internet platform and so on. There would be a special commissioner to review this news from the official media, therefore the credibility of this news is extremely high. In addition, the official media would not permit the mistake or fake news happened. Contrast with nowadays, because fake news and pictures are abundant and sometimes difficult to distinguish, even the official media will make false reports occasionally. For example, pictures of aliens processed by photoshop have been published many times by some official media.
According to the above statements, the current news does have an amount of false content, some of which will affect the public and some just to entertain the public. Since that the public needs to read this news with critical thinking to prevent to lost in the massive information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...y of news meanwhile the authenticity of these news has also lost its guarantee. Firstl...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hese news has also lost its guarantee. Firstly, the development of the Internet...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e the public in the form of fake news. Secondly, although these fake news can b...
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Line 6, column 541, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to believing'.
Suggestion: used to believing
...explain to my parents, because they are used to believe the news from the public media. Fi...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lieve the news from the public media. Finally, the news in the past indeed mor...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...hed many times by some official media. According to the above statements, the c...
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Line 10, column 167, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and some just to entertain the public. Since that the public needs to read this news...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2200.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04587155963 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84862754657 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516055045872 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6057513903 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.761904762 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7619047619 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09523809524 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216789748874 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742256586604 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392635061664 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117407940058 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332965435219 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.