Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？
Sometimes people think nowadays the media (TV, newspaper, Internet) are less concerned about the accuracy of news than in the past, and the incorrect information may cause more problems to the public.
Recently, there are more and more news people can obtain than before. However, lots of them may less concern about the truth of news than in the past.
First, media want to become successful due to the fierce competition among media. As the increasing number of information in daily life, people are more likely to focus on the news which is more unique and attractive than a normal one. In this way, the media in order to make more money through the readers they may exaggerate the fact of news or even make up a fake one, which have bad impact on the society. For instance, last month, an information was posed on the Internet, it said that there would be a huge earthquake happened in Sichuan. When people saw this news, everyone was extremely nervous and afraid. Thus, plenty of people went out and sleep outside for a hole night. Nevertheless, it turned out it was a fake news made by a teenager through his imagination. Accordingly, news we see today is less accurate than the news in the past.
Second, now this is a we media era, everyone are able to post information on the Internet. Previously, news only can be posted on the newspapers and certain programs on the TV, which are under supervision of the government. Back to 50 years ago, if Chinese wanted to attain news, reading newspaper was the only way. In this case, most of news were really true. On the contrary, there is not any organizations to revise the messages on the Internet. Even though some of them are real, some of them are false. Therefore, the news is less genuine than before.
Finally, nowadays, people read news just for fun so they do not care about the accuracy of the information. In contrast, people were more concerned about the news of the society even the whole world than these days. Besides, if they found out something wrong they would tell the government or the media, which was helpful to improve the truth of the news. Hence, media in today may focus on the fact of the news less than the previous news.
As the three reasons I have mentioned above, it is easy to draw the conclusion that recently, news is becoming more unreliable than them back then.
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Suggestion: a; we
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, second, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60723514212 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42721363646 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509043927649 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9331120006 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0454545455 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5909090909 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295951342936 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947116098766 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672315990621 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186370251642 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796971887374 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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