Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Today's world, many different subjects are introducing to human lives day to day. Any individuals need to be aware of these different fields of knowledge to be known as an intellectual person. Although many may think that specialized knowledge is more valuable, I subscribe different points of view for being a successful person in today's life. There are many different reasons for this idea; the most conspicuous ones are explained hereunder.
The most important factors that should be taken into account is that nowadays, an individual must be aware of different fields of science and technology to be a knowledgeable person. Thus, specialization in a narrow range of science, although give them a dig deep view, cannot provide them with an adequate knowledge to have an up-to-date life. For instance, The UNESCO introduced a package of six field of awareness that is required for 21th century to be a knowledgeable person; among them different fields range from media science to social ability exist.
Another factor that we must consider is finding job and its prerequisites. These days, wide range of information about various aspects of a science is much vital factors than being a specialist and expert in a specific subject because less job is that detail. Furthermore, most of companies have an internship period for whom want to take the job and this training makes the job seeker specialist in the particular field. On the other hand, someone who has wide range of knowledge and abilities has greater chance to find a prestigious job compared to others. For example, when I attend to a refinery interview which decided to choose a person for a vacancy, they wanted to choose someone who has management knowledge and English language along with a professional engineering since, and since I could speak English they chose me.
To conclude, the race of changing the definition of being knowledgeable person and the requirement of being aware of new fields of science, beside more job choice for people who have broad knowledge leads us to conclude that for today's world specialize in being one subject doesn't work anymore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
Todays world, many different subjects are introducing to human lives...
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Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: much may; a good deal of may
...own as an intellectual person. Although many may think that specialized knowledge is mor...
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Line 1, column 355, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...essful person in todays life. There are many different reasons for this idea; the most conspic...
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Line 2, column 398, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'field' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'fields'.
Suggestion: fields
... The UNESCO introduced a package of six field of awareness that is required for 21th ...
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Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the companies') or simply say ''most companies''.
Suggestion: most of the companies; most companies
...e less job is that detail. Furthermore, most of companies have an internship period for whom want...
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Line 4, column 275, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...s world specialize in being one subject doesnt work anymore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, thus, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06818181818 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84508783579 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7971801563 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.230769231 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0769230769 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153079907108 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059600608783 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441580421239 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10675815804 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347252406493 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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