Imagine that you plan to donate money to charity to help people in need. If you could give money to
only one type of charitable organization, which one of the following would you choose and why?
- An organization that provides food and housing to people in need
- An organization that gives people money to start their own small business
- An organization that provides medical care to people in need
Today's world, many different subjects are introducing to human lives day to day. Any individuals need to be aware of these different fields of knowledge to be known as an intellectual person. although many may think that specialized knowledge is more valuable, I subscribe different points of view for being a successful person in today's life. There are many different reasons for this idea; the most conspicuous ones are explained hereunder.
The most important factors that should be taken into account is that nowadays, an individual must be aware of different fields of science and technology to be a knowledgeable person. Thus, specialization in a narrow range of science, although give them a dig deep view, cannot provide them with an adequate knowledge to have an up-to-date life. For instance, The UNESCO introduced a package of six field of awareness that is required for 21th century to be a knowledgeable person; among them different fields range from media science to social ability exist.
Another factor that we must consider is finding job and its prerequisites. these days, wide range of information about various aspects of a science is much vital factors than being a specialist and expert in a specific subject because less job is that detail. Furthermore, most of companies have an internship period for whom want to take the job and this training makes the job seeker specialist in the particular field. On the other hand, someone who has wide range of knowledge and abilities has greater chance to find a prestigious job compared to others. For example, when I attend to a refinery interview which decided to choose a person for a vacancy, they wanted to choose someone who has management knowledge and english language along with a professional engineering since, and since I could speak english they chose me.
To conclude, the race of changing the definition of being knowledgeable person and the requirement of being aware of new fields of science, beside more job choice for people who have broad knowledge leads us to conclude that for today's world specialize in being one subject doesn't work anymore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
Todays world, many different subjects are introducing to human lives...
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Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
... to be known as an intellectual person. although many may think that specialized knowled...
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Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: much may; a good deal of may
...own as an intellectual person. although many may think that specialized knowledge is mor...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...essful person in todays life. There are many different reasons for this idea; the most conspic...
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Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'field' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'fields'.
Suggestion: fields
... The UNESCO introduced a package of six field of awareness that is required for 21th ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...r is finding job and its prerequisites. these days, wide range of information about v...
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Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the companies') or simply say ''most companies''.
Suggestion: most of the companies; most companies
...e less job is that detail. Furthermore, most of companies have an internship period for whom want...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...s world specialize in being one subject doesnt work anymore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, thus, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07954545455 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84508783579 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7971801563 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.538461538 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0769230769 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0552316663235 0.236089414692 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0218665154428 0.076458572812 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.023751496206 0.0737576698707 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0381721545592 0.150856017488 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0060397465091 0.0645574589148 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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