In today's modern world , technology play a vital role in an individual life of person. It is double edge sword , there have so many merits and demerits. In this essay , I will discuss both views and at the end come to the conclusion.
At the outset , music can help both academic and professional. with the advent of technology , people can analyse the data related to his job and search any type of information under the cloud with the help of world wide Web. For example , there are so many websites on internet which help in study of student . And by the help of internet , people can know the meaning of every word in every language. with the help of advanced technology , people can consume our time by internet .They they can buy online any particular type of item .
In contrast , technology can destroy the traditional way of communication and make a virtual relationship . For instance , before the technology people can celebrate all festivals with our family or relatives as well . But nowadays , people can celebrate all festivals by texting on WhatsApp aur Facebook. And mor use of internet can cause many diseases like obesity and weak eyesight as well . More of children spend our time on computer . They can play video game on PC rather than outdoor activities.
To conclusion , in my opinion , there are many people who use technology in wrong way . Technological advancement is good if it is use in a good manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80816326531 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71764666901 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575510204082 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4818335742 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.625 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3125 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106325484126 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446149318756 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719232983969 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889175627062 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840350613999 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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