In today's modern world, technology play a vital role in an individual life of person. It is double edge sword, there have so many merits and demerits. In this essay, I will discuss both views and at the end come to the conclusion.
At the outset, music can help both academic and professional. with the advent of technology, people can analyse the data related to his job and search any type of information under the cloud with the help of world wide Web. For example, there are so many websites on internet which help in study of student. And by the help of internet, people can know the meaning of every word in every language. with the help of advanced technology, people can consume our time by internet.They they can buy online any particular type of item.
In contrast, technology can destroy the traditional way of communication and make a virtual relationship . For instance, before the technology people can celebrate all festivals with our family or relatives as well . But nowadays, people can celebrate all festivals by texting on WhatsApp aur Facebook. And mor use of internet can cause many diseases like obesity and weak eyesight as well. More of children spend our time on computer. They can play video game on PC rather than outdoor activities.
To conclusion, in my opinion, there are many people who use technology in wrong way. Technological advancement is good if it is use in a good manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82786885246 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77055707683 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594262295082 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2023935154 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.625 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0937345803336 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412443420696 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726676216451 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833825436816 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881733165919 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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