Each year, the crime is increases
What are the cause of crime and what causes be done to prevent this rise in criminal activities
In modernisation Eire, crime rate is increasing day by day. There are many courses are there, while the crime growth is booming and some remedies are there how to stop the criminal activities.I will discuss if factor and remedies in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are many factors are there, by the crime rate is increased. Primarily, there are many peoples are unemployed. They do not do any work and I do not earn money. In that way they do criminal activities for earning money, like Robbing, robbery. In addition, nowadays, the many peoples are addict with drugs and they do not think anything and they do crime.moreover, the politicians Play the male role in crime if any person do not follow the politician guidance, they kill the person without any reason.
There are many remedies are there how to eradicate this problem. Government is also subject for the crime and government should give punishment to criminals. In addition, those are unemployed, the government should give jobs and give the good opportunities in their life. Because they do not go wrong hand furthermore, government should create strict law for drug mafia, those are catching police hand and the police give punishment to the criminal for till death.
In conclusion, every people has their own views, I do not deny any of them, but I could you get if you comment should give jobs to unemployed person, so the crime rate is decrease, because many person are free in their life and they do not earn bread and butter. If the government should give opportunity to the persons those are free so that the crime rate is decrease and person success in the life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82042253521 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61834310035 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468309859155 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.0223858672 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.307692308 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111110700862 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496451774323 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328380275843 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759821809083 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253270646351 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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