Each year, the crime rate increases.
What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
The crime rates in many countries have been increased. This trend is likely to continue because these days people are isolated and barely talk and meet with neighbors. Not only that, people are abusing drugs and drink heavily to relieve their stress. Many governments try to decrease crime rate, but it already became chronical and difficult to solve. However, since it can impact to our life a lot, we should check what is root cause and come up with solutions to solve this issue.
One of the causes of crime is that people are easy to get alcohol or drugs. When people are intake these things, they are not aware of what they are doing or conducting. According to quarterly report from Government organization, it says that 60% of the car accidents are caused by drivers who drink alcohol. Therefore, the easier people can get alcohol and drugs, the more crimes will be on our society.
To solve this issue, the government can regulate drugs and drink more heavily. In Canada, it is illegal to drink outside so people tend to buy alcohol and drink only at home. This policy is a good example to show what government can do. Also, drugs are heavily prohibited on many Asian countries and people who take these pills can be arrested and sentenced. These are good policies to decrease the crime rate.
In conclusion, people become very easy to do crime after taking drugs and alcohol. Therefore, as above, government should make policies to regulate these substances and relevant programs to reduce crime rate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 210, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...relevant programs to reduce crime rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81609195402 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37411900265 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8831508901 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.5625 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204859649572 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776803463376 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501547781728 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137690251775 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022230844965 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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