Each year, the crime rate increases.
What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
From the last decade, the crime rate has sped up in a drastic way in addition to this every year new variant of crimes are recorded. I would blame the unemployment of youngsters and abuse of drugs in the society among new generations and the probable solution to this is a rehabilitation of criminals and control on youth steps.
The loss of focus on growth and future prospectus is one of the main reason to rise in criminal activities in the society. Jobs and higher education entangled the most of the youth population in daily activities and in future plannings, which indirectly makes them disciplined and matured enough to build their future independently. Take an example, countries with most numbers of unemployed youth have the higher rate of criminal activities such as Uganda, where most of the youths are jobless. Statistical data for last year showed 90 per cent of youth were involved in drugs abuse and criminal activities.
Steps must be taken before it reaches the saturation level and overflows which could result in the worst conditions for the society to live. Rehabilitation of criminals to support them in rebuilding their normal social life, discussions and training to the criminals are very effective to boost their normal routine. The government should run awareness program in localities for youngsters about the side effects of drugs, an outcome of criminal activities. Create more vacancies for the unemployed youth to engage them in routine activities of normal social human being.
To sum up, the crime rates in most of the developing nations are increasing year by year. Mainly the reason behind is unemployment in youth, which way out their life to criminal activities and hampered the society. The government must manage the employment sector to create more and more jobs to resettle the way out individuals and improve the quality of life for youngsters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10576923077 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80697325706 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525641025641 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3624527641 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.538461538 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194512147298 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733367840864 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06202417302 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122859999668 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398589642834 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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