It is undoubtedly true that the rate of crime is increasing day by day due to multiple reasons such as unemployment, illiteracy and drug addictions.It can be stopped by taking intiatives which i shall highlight in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, nowadays crime rate is showing an upward trend as the unemployment rate is very high.And everyone want to fullfill their neds as well to raise their children , they indulge themselves in offense such as robbery and theft.Moreover, many people are addicted to various drugs such as alcohol, smack and cigrettes and for the completion of their demands , they kidnaps the kids and ask for huge amount from their parents.Admittedely , some of the youngsters follow T.V heros who acts as criminals in serials and do the same in real life without knowing the risky effects.
Every problem has its solution, similarly the crime rate should also be addressed by taking intiatives.Firsty the goverment should provide miniatue jobs to everyone so that they can survive in their life easily and complete their even basic needs.Secondly, there should be prohibition of drugs mean the prople who sells the drugs should be fined and even gave strict punishment while kept them in prison.Last but not least, it should be the primary duty of the parents to look after their children and not alliw them to see the serials and movies related to crime.
In conclusion, the crime rate can stopped only if their would be the instalation of CCTV cameras on public places.In this way the offender would be caught easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01930501931 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90836689291 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610038610039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 188.730462565 49.4020404114 382% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 325.0 106.682146367 305% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.75 20.7667163134 312% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.25 7.06120827912 428% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155921088173 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103183089721 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321764628603 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103183089721 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321764628603 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.6 13.0946893788 264% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.98 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.77 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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