Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth.
Do you agree or disagree?
Education - there is always an argument among the masses , if its an essential need or a luxury. Do rich people required to be educated at all? If the answer is yes , should they get it for free? Considering it a basic human right i would like to express my opinion about how educating everyone for free going to have a positive impact on the society.
Giving education for free in these places have clear advantages.Firstly, equality which is the core of getting same quality of education to everyone.Educational institutions like schools and colleges are places where children come together irrespective of wealth and social standards.They wear same uniform emphasizing equality among everyone.Equal and similar education standards should be made a fundamental human right in the society. It will help create good talents who will benefit the nation.
Secondly,knowledge is worth more than money.If education is commercialized like a business then the standards of the people who have access to it is going to come down.For example, a person with more wealth but less interest to study is going to get good education and vice versa. This will create an imbalance in the society by producing less innovative people who are merely rich.
In conclusion , good and equal education which is free and accessible to every citizen of a country is empowering the masses with knowledge.This knowledge will help build a country which is high in standards.The government should ensure that each of its citizen should get good quality education for free.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18725099602 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19345254814 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569721115538 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.594178684 49.4020404114 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.666666667 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301873775989 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117223784896 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778242933901 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182666372213 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872874325089 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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