Environmental issues have been increasingly ergent in today's world. Some people believe that international efforts is exclusive way to resolve it, while person and goverment's strength is far away from enough. In my view, internatioal coroperation is the foundamental and irreplacable way to improve the environment.
Global cooperation can collect a larger volume of resources to develope the environment effectively. By conbining together, every country contributes its own resourses such as money and labour to invest in eco-friendly grogram. And this can be accumulated to such an amount that no one single country can provide. For example, many countries such as US and Japanese spending money together to explore a new kind of clean energy resource. With humanbeing exploring further on these gaint fields, those global environmental issues which used to be admiditted as untrackable, such as global warming can be stress to some extent. By comparison, it's difficult for those individuals or countries to make contribution to the generate environment of the earth.
In addition, international cooperation can also diminish negetive effect on glabal environment. The group formed by several countries can work more effective in reducing pollution and are also be given priority. For instance, these global organizations can issue many regulations that can constrain people from exceedingly emit carbon-dioxide. They can also do mmasive eco-friendly anouncement which can be easily noticed by people wordwide. Consequently, counries that cooperating togerther can work more efficiently comparing to working solely.
However, individual people and countries' efforts are also valueble because they can also adopt some valid mathods to promot environment. For example, countries can encourge low-emmision vehicles and ban those industries with high pollution. Citizens can broadcast eco-friendly ideas in their community and cut down the usage of resourses in the daily life. The possitive consequences to environment cannot be neglected and if these individuals insist on these methods in a long period.
In conclusion, adressing environmental issues internationally is the only way because pollution can be effectively restricted and a large amount of resourses can be collected and utilised to solve the problem.
- Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since the computer technology is now replacing their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some people think that students benefit from going to private secondary schools. Others, however, feel that private secondary schools can have a negative effect on society as a whole. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
- Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment to address it at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with thi 84
- Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination Other think money and appearance are more important Disscuss both sides and give your opinion 87
- Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination. Other think money and appearance are more important.Disscuss both sides and give your opinion. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 715, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ls or countries to make contribution to the generate environment of the earth. In additio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76744186047 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2827992975 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578488372093 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2017531912 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.421052632 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1052631579 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155326568424 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539325718381 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336329891576 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969556283581 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235736512088 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.89 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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