Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment to address it at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Environment plays a crucial role for every individual living around and also for the inhabiting nations. To protect the environment is not only a responsibility of the person residing there or the country, but it’s an obligation of all living on this global village, what we call it as the Earth. I agree that to tackle such big issue of protecting an environment, all nations should come together. This can be accomplished by sharing the technologies for nurture environment as well as to come up with the guidelines to reduce the damage.
Firstly, with the ever expanding technologies, solutions are available to stop polluting environment and start nurturing it. For example, cars running on fossil fuels can be replaced with the cars running on batteries or electricity, leading to the less or no emission of hazardous gases to the nature. The studies with electric cars have been completed and results are promising with zero emission of gases. Thus, this makes it clear that technology can help us in saving the Mother Nature.
Secondly, all the countries should settle on drafting the guideline in support of protecting the environment. For example, major countries like US, Europe, Russia, China have treaty signed off for not using nuclear energy as weapons for the welfare of people and nature. This treaty was signed seeing the detrimental impact of nuclear weapon on Japan by USA, many country lost their man and after effect of it even after decades on new generation. As most nations would agree, drafting and implementing even a single polluting factor will help our global village to see better time in future.
As seen above, its not only individual or nation, also technology and environment protecting guidelines can save the environment. It can be fast-tracked with the exchange of technologies and idea between different countries.
- Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.To what extent do you agre 91
- Some people think that computers and the internet are more important for a child's education than going to school. But others believe that schools and teachers are essential for children to learn effectively. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- Some people think that the main factors influencing a child's development these days are things such as television, friends, and music. Others believe that the family still remains more important.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children).To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.Why is this the case?What can be done about this problem? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ic cars have been completed and results are promising with zero emission of gases. Thus, this...
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Line 5, column 583, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...p our global village to see better time in future. As seen above, its not only individ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16171617162 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87385037895 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584158415842 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8752965195 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.714285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213196046889 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072785249431 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051471097498 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126002638057 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562796497436 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.