Essay topics: government should make more efforts to promote alternative sources of energy.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In my point of view, government should definitely have heavily public policies to find another source of energy. It is imperative for our planet health we stop consume all these non renewable fuel. I agree with this statement for two reasons, and I will present them in this essay.
One of the main reasons why I strongly support this idea is because non renewable sources of fuel will end soon. Then, it’s government duty find another way to produce energy, to sell or use it internally. If some nation develops new technology to transportation or heat, for instance, this might be crucial for their economy in a short future. When everyone don’t have fossils fuels available anymore, these countries will already be ready to produce energy alternatively.
I also would argue that the environmental impact of global production of energy using dirty source will be catastrophic. Indeed, producing energy in this way is terribly dangerous for our planet. For example, we’ve been caused serious climate changes, deforestation and even extinction of several animal species just to produce energy to support our way of life.
Despite of all advantages to invest in alternatives sources, only few countries around the world are investing massively in it. In fact, it’s pretty expensive to support financially researchers to find this alternative source. Most of countries have more serious issues to fight against such as misery, social discrepancy and terrible health services. Then, understandably, they should tackle them before to go after environmental issues.
Finally, I would agree that is extremely helpful for the planet developing new energy source system. However some nations should invest first in dignity for their population before to begin to support strongly these kind of research.
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Most of the countries; Most countries
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Suggestion: However,
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ion before to begin to support strongly these kind of research.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in fact, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39160839161 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85045464646 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625874125874 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5273285082 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139612634875 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049417616425 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468488076305 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838556607475 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508490131825 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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