Essay topics: Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think that it is a waste of time.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
People have various views about art to be a part of children subject at school. while there seems that it is a waste of time, I subscribe to take part art as a lesson in school's chart.
In one hand,children in school age must be nurture in all sides of life, As they are be learned to understand mathematics, physics they should quietly have knowledge about art . besides that, the art is a kind of leisure activity which propel children to be thrived and innovative.
In the other hand, As personalities are vary, some types of children would not demonstrate any sign of interests in art. they would rather to find a solution for a math probe or burst they mind to detect a new solution for physics . Furthermore, the more amount of interest in art, the more cost of prices. artists sometimes complain about the cost of equipments like brushes, colourpencils, autopen and many other stuff which are necessary in this field. while you are investing money in badg<a>autopsy</a>ets, the output for a artist is near to none.
To Conclude, I would argue about the disadvantages of placing art as a field in schools, Its essential for children to spend time in learning art .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
...e a part of children subject at school. while there seems that it is a waste of time,...
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Suggestion: , children
...sson in schools chart. In one hand,children in school age must be nurture in all si...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...rture in all sides of life, As they are be learned to understand mathematics, phys...
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Suggestion: .
... should quietly have knowledge about art . besides that, the art is a kind of leis...
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Suggestion: Besides
...ould quietly have knowledge about art . besides that, the art is a kind of leisure acti...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'varied'.
Suggestion: varied
...In the other hand, As personalities are vary, some types of children would not demon...
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Suggestion: They
...monstrate any sign of interests in art. they would rather to find a solution for a m...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind detecting'.
Suggestion: mind detecting
...solution for a math probe or burst they mind to detect a new solution for physics . Furthermor...
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Suggestion: .
...ind to detect a new solution for physics . Furthermore, the more amount of interes...
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Suggestion: Artists
...terest in art, the more cost of prices. artists sometimes complain about the cost of eq...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun stuff seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much other stuff', 'a good deal of other stuff'.
Suggestion: much other stuff; a good deal of other stuff
...ike brushes, colourpencils, autopen and many other stuff which are necessary in this field. whil...
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Suggestion: While
...tuff which are necessary in this field. while you are investing money in badgautop...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n badgautopsyets, the output for a artist is near to none. To Conclude, ...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to art', 'to be'
Suggestion: to art; to be
... for children to spend time in learning art .
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Suggestion: .
...r children to spend time in learning art .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74146341463 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97039136345 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60487804878 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.108841187 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239446105761 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960080662462 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614407602481 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154571884023 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611453640248 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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