Each development of mankind has positive and negative side and globalization is not an exception. It has brought the people of different countries closer by making world economy sound and strong and the economic strength of the world is one of the greatest benefits of it. Nevertheless, it is not reasonable to ignore the side effects of this trend.
Due to globalization, the world has been got smaller and no place on this earth is out of reach of the human which has opened up the gate of the global market. This global market could make the competition among the manufacturer and seller tough which, at the end, beneficial to common man as everything would be available anywhere. Moreover, multinational companies have now opened its offshore centers in the developing country where low-cost labor is easily available and outsourced its most of the work to these centers. This has brought the opportunities to the community and increased the influx of the money and technology, increasing GDP of the growing nation.
On the flip side, it also has detrimental consequences which are not at all ignorable. Epidemic diseases like AIDS can now spread across the globe as transportation has made easy and accessible. Also, cultural homogeneity is one of the byproducts. For instance, in any country, youngsters are speaking one language and wearing the same kind of clothes destroying culture which has been developed from ages. Apart from these, a sweatshop is becoming the famous concept in all businesses.
To recapitulate, we must contend that globalization has come with many benefits; at the same time, it could also hound mankind by means of a plague of disease and culture assimilation. Local governments and individuals must take measures to tackle the problems which come with it.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'apart from', 'for instance', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245341614907 0.247107183377 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.149068322981 0.155533422707 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0931677018634 0.0946595960268 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0434782608696 0.0501214627716 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.027950310559 0.0437548338989 64% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114906832298 0.122226691241 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0527950310559 0.0403226058552 131% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.97335141555 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0217391304348 0.0326793684256 67% => OK
Particles: 0.00310559006211 0.00163938923432 189% => OK
Determiners: 0.127329192547 0.0861772015684 148% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0186335403727 0.021408717616 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0186335403727 0.011925033212 156% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1798.0 1933.35771543 93% => OK
No of words: 294.0 316.048096192 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.1156462585 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350340136054 0.374742101984 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.275510204082 0.28420135186 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.210884353741 0.203846283523 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.149659863946 0.137316102897 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97335141555 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.037074148 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605442176871 0.56093040696 108% => OK
Word variations: 67.1766177133 60.7387585426 111% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8582802404 49.517814964 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.428571429 127.492653851 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.814263465372 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 48.5510204082 49.1944974215 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.87323943662 1.69124875643 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166703101834 0.332605444948 50% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109033150841 0.102741220458 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0649389363314 0.0668466124924 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.600682115013 0.534860350844 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.143906248141 0.148594505496 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079458275257 0.134430193775 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361479457252 0.0742795772207 49% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.374670424671 0.324371583561 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.119676034642 0.0638462369009 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11323147309 0.228012699653 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044055398927 0.058150111329 76% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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