Globalization has changed the way of life around the world. Although it has a positive impact on economy of world, there are some negative affects too. In this essay, we will see both pros and cons globalization at economy level and draw a plausible conclusion.
To commence with, As an effect of globalization, people are getting new opportunities to market their products. There are no boundaries between world markets and thus buying and selling products from and through different companies become easier which has a direct impact on economy of a country. Moreover, many countries are ready to invest in other countries where natural resources and workforce is easily available. For instance, many countries invest for Software industries in India as the cost of manpower is less compared to their own countries. The more industries, more the chances of employment and thus investments of other company have profound affect on a developing nation success.
On the other hand, globalization is blamed for exploitation of natural resources and the consequences of global warming. This is because industries are moving to places where the natural resources are freely available and thus reducing their manufacturing costs by constructing their plants there. For example a textile industry might choose its location near to place where there is no shortage of water. So polluting the water and over utilization of natural resources is inevitable. Furthermore, if we consider employment opportunities people are more stressed with the burden of work, because their employer expects them to work for more hours to benefit them.
To conclude, although globalization has an overall positive effect with respect to employment and import or export of goods, careful intervention of government while giving permission to utilize the natural resources available might have a positive impact on a ground level.
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41275167785 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97734982063 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573825503356 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4957238297 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.214285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107355688407 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464340129879 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633549166516 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821004977258 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685683258765 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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