World’s second biggest problem after global warming, is poverty. Almost, all the countries in the world have considerable amount of poor population but their are few countries where the gap between the poor and the rich is huge. Also, different countries have different mechanism for handling the issue of poverty. Few of the reasons for poverty and different ways of dealing with the poverty would be discussed henceforth.
According to World’s Health Organization(WHO),the increase in population is directly proportional to the increase in poverty. For instance, the population of India and China has increased by an alarming rate and so has the percentage of poverty, in past few years. Many countries do not have good laws which caters to the needs of the poor, which in turn further increase the gap between the rich and the poor. Mostly, the government helps the rich population to bank in more votes for them and thus neglects the poor communities.
Although, the world poverty is a huge issue which would take many years to eradicate completely but still we all can put in efforts to help reach the goal. Broadly, there are two ways in which the poor can be helped - firstly, at the government level and secondly at an individual level. Government can reform laws to help poor, for example, Indian government have started funding low income families, if they wish to start a business and they have a good idea for their business. Also, at an individual level we can donate, educate or feed a poor family or community, every once in a while.
So, to conclude the issue of world poverty is a huge and a serious issue and it is very difficult to overcome it completely. Also, there are many reasons which leads to poverty but, as nations or as an individuals we should put our efforts and help the poor communities in all possible ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86119873817 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76051377393 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495268138801 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5356131692 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.071428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314610301629 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111373095013 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680004310444 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194836101368 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765318446273 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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