It’s an argued fact over centuries and also with different ethnic groups that female in any species is much better capable in the up-bringing of their offsprings as compared to their counterparts. I beg to differ that both have an equal role to play in raising their kid. Henceforth, are discussed few ways I feel, that both the parents have very crucial part in parenting.
Women, for ages are considered the epitome of birth and love. They embrace their child from all the negativities of the society and invest all their efforts in making their kids as happy as they can. The contributing reason for this is that they emotionally connects with their kids and are more sensitive towards their needs. Kids of all generation feel very comfortable in sharing things with their mom instead of their dad. In my experience, there are lot many things about me and my brother that we just shared with our mother and our father still have no clue about it all, and I guess, that’s because everyone can instantly connect with their mom.
On the contrary, fathers are the more adventurous, fun loving and carefree member of our family. They believe in letting us fall and get hurt instead of helping us with all our difficulties and thus making us more strong and agile. They make their kids learn new tricks and trades of the world and make them more world ready so that kids don’t have to learn things the hard way.
Also, statistically expressing that kids with single parent are more prone to commit a crime rather then the ones with both parents as both the parents are required for a kid to become a righteous person.
So to conclude, I vehemently believe that maternal love is very much needed for emotional development of the kid and paternal care is a must for the physical development, which finally helps in the overall development of the kids of our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'connect'
Suggestion: connect
...eason for this is that they emotionally connects with their kids and are more sensitive ...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...are more prone to commit a crime rather then the ones with both parents as both the ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, so, still, then, thus, i feel, i guess, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75914634146 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52033483312 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551829268293 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5773213079 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.076923077 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10867248982 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046103838539 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296241225632 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0613277823223 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284298484788 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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