Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an controversial issue about the accessibility of health care. Some patients state that it should be accessible for all regardless of their financial state. This essay disagrees with their viewpoint.
Let us start with reasons why some patients think that patients should not be charged at hospitals. First of all, more people would receive medical treatment. It often happens that people, who cannot afford costly hospital treatment, die, but if the treatment were free, they would survive. Another reason is that people would be cured equally. Poor people would be cured as effectively as the wealth, if health care were available for all. Furthermore, less people would travel to other countries for high-quality medicine. People with deadly diseases would address to local health care, if the government funded it enough to buy the modern both devices and cure patients for nothing in return.
However, some doctors argue that medicine should be paid. They support this point of view by the following arguments. Firstly, free medical treatment would diminish the budget of hospitals significantly. Many health centers, which provide medicine for free, spend all their resources on patients, so they cannot install modern devices for effective treatment. Secondly, the country would not receive money from the taxation on medical service. Most governments, where health care is unpaid, have large holes in the economy, but if medicine was paid, they would be able to increase the budget to develop other industries. Moreover, people would careless about their health. The number of patients would increase dramatically, if they attended hospitals uncharged, but with the expensive treatment, people are prone to looking after themselves carefully.
In conclusion, even though some patients advocate the idea of free medicine, I think it is unreasonable to make it free of charge for the above mentioned reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4219269103 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66580607004 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584717607973 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8111261571 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8947368421 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8421052632 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36842105263 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185322021312 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658664594823 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258823315153 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112805259582 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418754622014 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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