Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
There is a controversial issue about the accessibility of health system. Some patients state that it should be accessible for all citizens regardless of their financial status. This essay disagrees with their viewpoint.
Let us start with reasons why some patients think that the population should not be charged at hospital. To begin with, more people would receive medical therapy. It often happens that people, who cannot afford costly hospital treatment, either die or endure pain for long time, but if the treatment was free, they would lead normal life. Another reason is that the sick would be cured equally. Poor people would be served as effectively as the wealth, if health care was available for all. Furthermore, fewer people would travel to other countries for high-quality medicine. People with deadly diseases , such as cancer and HIV, would address to local health care, instead of visiting other countries with highly qualified medical stuff as well as the state-of-the-art medical apparatus.
However, some doctors argue that medicine should be paid. They support this point of view by the following arguments. Firstly, free medical treatment would significantly diminish the budget of hospitals. Many health centers, which provide medicine for free, spend all their resources on patients, so they can neither purchase or install modern devices for effective treatment. Secondly, the country would not receive money from the taxation on medical services. Most governments, where medical system is unpaid, have large holes in the economy, but if medicine was paid, they would be able to increase the budget and, therefore, to develop other industries. Moreover, people would become careless about their fitness. The number of patients would increase dramatically, if they attended hospitals freely, because they would think that medical personnel would cure them anyway, but with the expensive treatment, people are more likely to look after themselves more carefully.
In conclusion, even though some patients advocate the idea of free medicine, I think it is unreasonable to make it free of charge for the above mentioned reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 604, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: NEITHER_NOR[1]
Message: Use 'nor' with neither.
Suggestion: nor
... patients, so they can neither purchase or install modern devices for effective tr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44179104478 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67257099066 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.4911204544 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9473684211 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6315789474 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84210526316 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188588374349 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635853063165 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249983212105 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113311721851 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360094075581 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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