There is no doubt that a country’s history plays a major role in shaping its future. Since time immemorial, people have been keeping track of their histories by various methods. This essay will discuss some ways of storing the history as well as point out the importance of history to society.
One way of passing down the historical knowledge to the following generation is to establish more museums. This is because, museums are the archive of massive amount of historical information, which the visitors can easily achieve just by paying a visit there. For instance, the Bangladeshi government has built a huge museum that contains artifacts, documents and relics of its liberation war, reminding its citizens about its glorious past. Another method for conveying the historical facts to the upcoming generation is to make history lessons compulsory in the school. As teachers are the storehouse of knowledge, the history teacher would be able to enlighten the pupils with their in-depth knowledge of history. Therefore, schools can play a vital role in transferring history to the future generation.
History is considered as the foundation of a nation; hence, its significance cannot be denied. In other words, the emergence of a country does not usually happen overnight. In fact, it takes hundreds and thousands of years of struggles, wars, rebellions and political events to reach the stage as it is now. Consequently, history has paved the way to the formation of a civilization; thus, it cannot be led to fall into oblivion. Moreover, by analyzing the history, people will not only find out the great achievements of their ancestors but also the mistakes they had made. In this way, we would be able to avoid the repetition of the same mistake, and help in further advancement of our nation.
In conclusion, building new museums and instructing schools to make history class mandatory are two of the effective solutions to pass on history to the succeeding generation. The importance of history lies in being the base of a nation and the benefits it provide to help people learn from it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 258, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...he base of a nation and the benefits it provide to help people learn from it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08357348703 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86906966868 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587896253602 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4677114951 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.764705882 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387496692192 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114703668747 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075308456874 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238757796543 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046971251942 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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