Every culture, throughout time, has recorded its history in one way or another.
In what ways can history be passed on to the next generation?
Why is history important to society?
It is true that nation’s cultures are mainly based in their histories. This essay will detail some of the methods to transfer cultural values through generations, and will explore why history is a vital element for every society.
To begin with, there are various mediums through which historical knowledge can be conveyed to the youngsters, the most significant of which is learning history at schools. This is immensely vital because if students learn history as a compulsory part of their curriculum, this would ensure that all students could possess the sufficient historical knowledge of their country when they grow as adult citizens. For Instance, in Egypt, since all pupils are taught about the history of Pharaohs, Egyptians tend to have a great appreciation to their old civilization. Another significant method to communicate history to the younger generations is through the older generations. This is influential because the more are the old people keen on educating the children about their national history, the more those children may become interested in their history.
It is commonly believed that historical knowledge do have a crucial value for the society because the identity of people is typically formed by their culture, which in turn based on their country’s history. Although the future of any country tend to be the main concern of its people, personal values are frequently associated with the historical culture of people. That is to say, nations who value their cultural values usually have stronger community ties and healthier interpersonal relationships. What is more, when citizens have better historical awareness and thus more appreciation to their identity, they tend to have higher loyalty to their country.
In conclusion, schooling and older generations are two effective channels to transfer history to young generations. Historical knowledge can be very beneficial to societies in terms of strengthening the community ties and raising loyalty among citizens
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...their histories. This essay will detail some of the methods to transfer cultural values thr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then, thus, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with, what is more, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50803858521 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95368731809 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540192926045 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5683002139 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.769230769 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144247112115 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597047536941 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04699124805 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10039149303 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398266189612 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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