Nowadays more and more people are becoming vegetarian. Some people advocate that non vegetarian food especially meat persuade many health issues. I am in favor of this view to large extent. My explanation is justified further.
To begin with, it has been found that meat contains highest amount of fat and cholesterol molecules than any other food. They are readily absorbed by arteries and veins of human body and can result into devastating disease such as heart attack, DVT, atherosclerosis and so on. Moreover, another harming effect caused by such food is rapid increase in weight. Obesity is thought to be serious health issue which grows slowly but can end into a lot of life long problems. According to one study done by Harvard University is that 80% of population of United Status suffer from obesity and the major reason for this is eating meat and other non vegetarian food items. That is why most of the population is turning themselves into vegetarian group.
Furthermore, if the procedure of preparing meat is not sterile or handled with care, that can result into some life threatening diseases such as bird flu, swine flu. There were rapid increase in cases of Swine flu 5-6 years back and number of people dying from this was also high. However, the amount of vitamins and proteins that are gained from consumption of meat is also highest. It is also natural source of some important lipid and collagen tissues which are absent from vegetarian food. Their outcome on human body cannot be neglected.
To conclude, it is always an individual person’s choice about which type of food they would like to consume. Still everyone must be aware about the positive and negative effects of different eating items. In my opinion due to high number of unhealthy properties, people should try to avoid eating meat as much as possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 44, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'contains the highest'.
Suggestion: contains the highest
...begin with, it has been found that meat contains highest amount of fat and cholesterol molecules...
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Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...ype of food they would like to consume. Still everyone must be aware about the positi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92307692308 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52723495194 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0427359327 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165572177892 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458543738168 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358068089474 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970304783282 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036375429524 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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