Everyone should follow a vegetarian diet because it is not necessary to eat meat to be healthy. Do you agree or disagree?
it is often argued that all whether people should religiously follow a vegetarian just because meat is not everything someone needs to be fit and healthy. While it is a debatable topic, I strongly disagree with the idea that all the people should be forced to become a vegan or a vegetarian as many a time the food choices are not personal but depends upon the climatic conditions and type of food available locally for survival. This essay wil first discuss the aforementioned idea in detail and provide evidence to support.
The main drawback of eating meat products such as beef, pork, salmon, mutton, chicken is diseases such as obesity, a plethora of flu and other heart-related ailments. Furthermore, it is also against animal rights. For instance, according to a recent survey by the University of Boston, there is an alraming increase in the trend of obese percentage of the population in the countries with more meat consumption.
Despite the negative aspects mentioned above, lifecycle and food chain has to be maintained. there are several causes which contribute; firstly, at times there is no choice available due to other dependent factors. The staple diet is affected a lot by the availability of the local food and climatic conditions. For instance, seaside cities like Krabi, Bali the most easily available source of food is seafood such as fish, prawns, shells etc. Therefore, often individuals have limited options. Secondly, in cold areas to keep the body temperature stable, consumption of high protein food is necessary like meat, to keep alive. Hence, at times it is more of a survival trick then pleasure.
To recapitulate, the aforementioned ideas evidently encapsulate the two reasons explaining how everyone cannot be a vegetarian even if all the required nutrients can be provided by vegetarian food like green vegetables, diary products, fruits etc.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, as to, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16993464052 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90299104364 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9690760191 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207512691749 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534916609914 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729451770945 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113030889756 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623373119527 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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