Famous pop and sports stars earn millions of dollars each. Many other entertainment and sports personalities also have very high incomes. On the other hand, most people in ordinary professions like nurses, doctors and teachers earn only a small fraction of the incomes of these stars.
What do you think about stars receiving very high remunerations? Is it fair that people with jobs that directly help people are paid much less?
The eminent individuals of the society like singers, sportsmen or entertainers are earning a hefty amount of money whereas the people who utilize their professional skills for the well being of the society are recieveing an inconsiderable amount. It is a popular believe that the stars should be paid a large amount of money as becasue they nurture their unique talents to entertain people in many ways. However, it is extremely unreasonable that people with decent jobs with professional expertise are paid less.
Celebrities are highly paid in our society as they mastered the trade of entertaing people and are well appriciated by the majority of the population. In addition, people are also tremendously supportive to the celebrities as they believe that they are the representatives of the nation in the world. The reason to believe is that they demonstrate certain skills which are exceptionally unique. For instance, the renowned football star Messy has been mesmerizing his fans for the last 10 years and eventually made himself the best player in the world. Till now his certain styles of playing is not replacable and he is earning a lot. So it is evident that their remuneration is justified.
On the contray, it is not even justifiable that who is not a star in the society recive less payments. Professional people like physicians, techaers and nurses are also well deserved to earn a significant amount of money. As because they are working for the development of the entire nation and contributing a lot in the well being of people. For example, teaching is considered as the most reputed profession in many contries just becasue they help students to build their career and hence contributing positively to the nation's progress. Therefore, it completely unfair when people of such professions are paid less.
To recapitulate, it is seen all around the world that starts are earning
millions and job hoders are just earning for their living. Even though the starts have strong reasons to make a lot money, the professional individuals should get paid an adequate amount considering their involvement in their job. And a society should act fair to ensure favorable amount of earnings to these people who are really helping others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 89, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun payments is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Millions
...und the world that starts are earning millions and job hoders are just earning for the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, really, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12432432432 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91626005027 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502702702703 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7242373622 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.529411765 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7647058824 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140213086569 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483423898618 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371797131495 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848569784793 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193038209149 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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