Nowadays, many parents are sending their kids abroad to acquire good education. But, if and when these foreign educated students get back to their native country, they find it difficult to adjust themselves to the work life there. What kind of challenges do the people educated overseas face in their own country? What advice would you offer such people?
Nowadays, studying in foreign institutions becomes increasingly popular among today's children. Even though the parents ensure better education for their kids by sending them abroad, someday they come back to their home countries and start to suffer for the local job environment. This essay will discuss the challenges they encounter in the work life and also present a couple of advices for them to cope up with the situations.
Primarily, the main concern of a foreign educated student is the relevence of the subject he studied abroad with the current job market in his home country. It is evident that he chose the subject out of fascination. Secondaly, their high expectations for a reputed job creates a dilemma when they find that the country he belongs to doesn't offer a minimum wage structure for jobs. The difference in administrative policy among the countries is a reason for it. For instance, I have seen one of my best friend obtained a journalism degree with excellent score from A renowned school in UK but undergone some serious struggle finding the suitable job for him due to his good expectation and lack of demand of that occupation.
These problems can be solved if a student can gain some relevant experiences whether part time or freelance to add value to their resume. Then they have something to validate their high expectations. Also, choosing the right subject for higher study is really vital in case if you want to get back to your country. As a student, one should alawys research about the job market of where he wants to pursue his career. For example, one of my fellow classmates was astute enough to achieve his engineering degree with some voluntary experience from abroad and come back home later to have a great job. He knew engineers are highly demanded professional in our country.
Although foreign educated students are considered as intelligent, often they have to experienc some problems in the real job market. This essay has discussed those problems in detail and also put light on some valueable advice they can follow to overcome thie difficulties.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: part-time
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...rsue his career. For example, one of my fellow classmates was astute enough to achieve his engine...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, second, so, then, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00852272727 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71416713821 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605113636364 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5248453115 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.1875 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209815259399 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666929975524 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527543192864 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131698577063 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560560309532 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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