few people devote their time to hobbies nowadays.put your opinion why is it so? how it is helpful to both individual and society?
Sustaining a monotonous life and accomplishing the mundane tasks lead to an acute depression. Therefore, nowadays, time is being devoted by some people to endeavor their interests, which can be attributed to the fact that pursuing the hobbies lowers the stress level. Hence, jutting out the positive impact on both individuals as well as society, which I will be addressing in the following paragraphs.
Initially, I would like to highlight the fact that people whose hobbies are their profession have a higher life expectancy rather than those who work to earn. Together with it, pursuing the hobbies makes people more gleeful and satisfied, as it tranquilizes their impending desires, it gives them a perfect break from their strenuous life. In addition to it, hobbies ornates the resume and personality of an individual which as result augments probability of getting hired.
However, it is not only beneficial to the individual but also to the society as a whole, as people bonds fairly over similar interests, together with it, hobbies pave way for structuring many community events which strengthens the social bond. Furthermore, community events provide a platform to showcase one’s interest is more piquing for both society and individual, it’s a podium where people not only knowledge but they also find new comrades.
In conclusion, hobbies are an ineluctable part of an individual’s life, as it transforms a humdrum life into an eventful and lively course to stroll. Additionally, it reduces the stress of an individual as well as of a society, while, cementing the relationship of members from acquaintances to companions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...the positive impact on both individuals as well as society, which I will be addressing in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34099616858 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07745607547 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60153256705 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.1 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.4 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211318959463 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783246096532 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472267120969 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119692999312 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403725549852 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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