A few people think that invest public money in libraries is pretty important for a city otherwise some people think that this might be a waste o money because they already have easy access to internet. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
In my point of view, libraries are tremendously important for every city. So, I really believe that investing heavily in it will bring uncountable benefits for population in general. Despite of all easy internet access today, I think that all these investments might be positive in many aspects.
There is a tendency to think that internet will make all books in the world useless. Although, I would argue that books are more crucial now than before. Indeed, finding some information with Google or other tools online is faster than in past. However, people is actually losing their capacity to find deeper things. By this I mean that users are always looking for superficial information. Unfortunately, they are accustomed to have answers quickly in their computers instead of find reliable information on books.
Also, even if books become completely retired in future, I can see many others benefits in communities with active libraries. I believe that books are not the only purpose of a library. In fact, there are many other program that might be interesting for the citizens. They create an environment proper to study and research as well. For instance, Winnipeg’s Public Library offers many services such as children program to beginning readers, social assistance and even English classes.
Other way to approach this idea would be about how useful libraries can be to schools. Logically, they’re not isolated institutions, they are part of huge system of education. So, their structure should be used by them to stimulate children and teenagers to have access to good information. Sadly, they aren’t not properly incentivized to have relevant content, and libraries can help authorities to provide them this.
Therefore, the idea to invest public money in libraries is, in my point of view, extremely positive to a city. So, they can combine several activities pretty useful for us, and they incentivize us to have more profound information in their books either.
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
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Suggestion: accustomed to having
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Suggestion: in the future
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Suggestion: programs
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, look, really, so, therefore, well, for instance, i mean, i think, in fact, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25625 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85174699746 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1592985918 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.1 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273400686419 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712655886856 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537062637644 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146128537234 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577524430085 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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