Fossil fuels are the main source of energy around the world. However, people are being encouraged to use alternative energy sources such as wind energy, solar energy and so on. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Why?
It is an undeniable fact that fossil fuel is the major source of energy all over the globe, but government is trying to motivate the people to start utilizing and adopting other renewable ways of getting energy. I assert that this change is mandatory as it has myriads of benefits.
To begin with, fossil fuels are non- renewable source of energy, so they will definitely exhaust one day. As the population of the world is increasing at the alarming rate, the demand for the resources is also accelerating. If we will depend only on fossil fuel, the day is not far when this world will utilize all the fuels and left with no energy source. Forecasting the future, authorities and environmentalist are encouraging the masses to start using other source of energy. For example, under government sponsor scheme banks in India are providing the subsidized loan to the individuals who want to install solar panel at their resident, in order to increase its popularity and adaptability.
Moving further, combustion of fossil fuel is having devastating effects on the environment, especially on air. The quality of air is deteriorating continuously because of the carbon produced by burning fossil fuels, where as the energy produced by the wind and water are environment friendly. So usage of natural sources of energy is also the way to provide clean living environment to the future generation and make the world more beautiful and pollution free. Hence, spreading the awareness and making people more aware to use alternate energy has huge advantages.
In conclusion, unequivocally fossil fuels are the most popular energy source. From the above points, it is irrefutable that other sources of energy which are renewable and friendly to the nature must be brought popular among people , as they will save the earth and fulfill the energy requirement in the better way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81508756644 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577922077922 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1111372445 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.615384615 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37200312773 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122041899759 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690000199114 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225577679266 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428675369316 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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