What's makes our planet is unique as compared to other planet is that the plentiful availability of fresh water, almost 70% of the earth is covered by water. It is the life source of the every living organisms. Sadly our fresh water reserve is decreasing rapidly because of the over exploitation of resources. Experts predict that, if we continue to use water like this, we will soon end in in most dreadful condition.
There are lot of reasons which adds the demand for the water around the world. Firstly, industries are the one's who is exploiting water resources without any caution. We are living in the industrialisation era, many countries are opened their borders to big industries. They use plenty of water for manufacturing purpose. Secondly, agriculture is the another sector which is using water abundantly for farming and related activities. Lastly, society is also responsible for this increasing demand for water, they use water resources carelessly without realising fact that it's reserves are drying out vastly than ever.
To tackle this issue governments and societies should work together. Authorities should charge industries and households on the based of their use volume. As long as its been given as free, people don't realise the value of it. Furthermore, authorities should encourage people to recycle and reuse the water they use. Moreover, government should educate people about how to increase the fresh water reserve like planting trees and rain water harvesting.
To conclude, water is scares resource, if we don't use it wisely we will lose our precious gift. Hence everyone should take the responsibility of saving water resources and its ideal use.
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- Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree. 85
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20588235294 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76591806968 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595588235294 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4647467248 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2941176471 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.077541347392 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276067031077 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321906819226 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0472208295459 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163604963983 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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